New draft with new ideas

Here is my new draft with my ideas from my last post. I still have to add the smoke to the gun, and I'm thinking that it will appear earlier. I would like to get people's opinions of the foot steps during the wanted signs section. I'm not sold on that extra sound... Also, I added more swivel to the signs. Does that look better?

But I'm really confused about the dollar! Should it swivel? In this draft I think it's too boring, and that it should have some movement. But I can't think of what...

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end of movie breakthrough!

i know what i'm going to do with the end of the movie! when you zoom into the hole in the dollar, i'm going to have a smoking revolver barrel come into view and i might work the director into the smoke somehow (or perhaps not... we will see...) and then you zoom into the barrel of the gun into darkness and the movie fades in.

i will make an updated storyboard for this idea and post it soon.

Here is another draft of my movie. I worked on the bullet hole, but it still seems really computer generated. I think I'm going to play more with making the ripped bits of paper blow out more. It doesn't seem like that explosion is big enough. Also the ending zoom is really long so I don't know what to do with that. I think I might put the director's name in there and zoom in on it. But I'd like some input on that. My other question was about the wanted signs in the beginning. Should I make the swiveling action more pronounced, or should I add some footsteps? I also don't quite know what I'm going to do with the swiveling dollar... I might take out that movement.

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trying again...

ok, so my movie isn't working for some reason so i'm going to try to upload it a different way...

FINALLY!!

Here is my movie so far FINALLY!

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movie is almost here...

ok so my movie is taking forever and a day to export, but it will be here! apparently it just needs time... ALOT of time...