Here is another draft of my movie. I worked on the bullet hole, but it still seems really computer generated. I think I'm going to play more with making the ripped bits of paper blow out more. It doesn't seem like that explosion is big enough. Also the ending zoom is really long so I don't know what to do with that. I think I might put the director's name in there and zoom in on it. But I'd like some input on that. My other question was about the wanted signs in the beginning. Should I make the swiveling action more pronounced, or should I add some footsteps? I also don't quite know what I'm going to do with the swiveling dollar... I might take out that movement.

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