Here is my new draft with my ideas from my last post. I still have to add the smoke to the gun, and I'm thinking that it will appear earlier. I would like to get people's opinions of the foot steps during the wanted signs section. I'm not sold on that extra sound... Also, I added more swivel to the signs. Does that look better?
But I'm really confused about the dollar! Should it swivel? In this draft I think it's too boring, and that it should have some movement. But I can't think of what...
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The bullet sound/hole is a lot more impressive this time around ... but the sound of footsteps seems a little distracting to me. And yes, the dollar needs some movement ... maybe have it doing something similar to what the wanted posters do?
Definitely a big improvement on the bullet hole sound and animation. I agree with Drew that the dollar does need some movement. I liked how it rotated before.
The footsteps caught me off guard, maybe because I got used to there being no footsteps? However, it feels more real to me.
Finally, the zooming in on the hole feels slow. I found myself spacing out and thinking about other things while I waited for a new image to appear.
At any rate, it's looking good! Tomorrow's the big day! Are you excited to sit through-- I mean, watch everyone's movie? I'm excited for tomorrow! But I'm not going to tell you why, I'll show you in History ;)
Cheers!
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