i think that the sound is key. its a wonderful western into. i like how you incorporated the wanted posters, and other documents within your credits. I feel that in the transitions between the posters there is some awkward tempo issues, one seems to stall and then go, etc, but nothing major. I feel that there is enough time on each item to truly get a sense of what it is. when it comes to trying to synch micro qualities of the noise with movements, while it may be nice, should not be a focus unless you have lots of time to kill. I think it is a very good piece of work. i forget if you said, but besides working on the bullet hole, did you plan to do anything else?
I remember you talking about having a transition noise between the WANTED posters. I think footsteps would help, but it'd feel empty with just footsteps alone. I'd imagine there would be more people than just the viewer in the town, so maybe adding ambiance noise, such as people talking, horse footsteps or noises, and gusts of wind might help. The music is perfectly wonderful, and I wouldn't change it. The font choices are very strong as well, and again, don't need attention.
The bullet hole. Ah yes. What to do? I know you're not happy with what you have. What exactly were you trying to do with it? Make the paper rip/tear when the bullet hole appears?
Aside from all of that, what you have so far is strong. Continue working and tweaking, and the end result will be spectacular, as usual, which is what I'd expect from my nemesis.
Hope the special effects are going well. Like i mentioned in class - i would just understand the context that we are seeing the money being shot in so you can translate that for the viewer. it is holding together visually so you don't need to use the movement/transitions to create unity. Good luck - let me know if you need more feedback about anything. The images/tone/dirt/sound are all working well together.
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This is fantastic! And, I must say, I like the bullet the way it is ...
i think that the sound is key. its a wonderful western into. i like how you incorporated the wanted posters, and other documents within your credits. I feel that in the transitions between the posters there is some awkward tempo issues, one seems to stall and then go, etc, but nothing major. I feel that there is enough time on each item to truly get a sense of what it is. when it comes to trying to synch micro qualities of the noise with movements, while it may be nice, should not be a focus unless you have lots of time to kill. I think it is a very good piece of work. i forget if you said, but besides working on the bullet hole, did you plan to do anything else?
I remember you talking about having a transition noise between the WANTED posters. I think footsteps would help, but it'd feel empty with just footsteps alone. I'd imagine there would be more people than just the viewer in the town, so maybe adding ambiance noise, such as people talking, horse footsteps or noises, and gusts of wind might help. The music is perfectly wonderful, and I wouldn't change it. The font choices are very strong as well, and again, don't need attention.
The bullet hole. Ah yes. What to do? I know you're not happy with what you have. What exactly were you trying to do with it? Make the paper rip/tear when the bullet hole appears?
Aside from all of that, what you have so far is strong. Continue working and tweaking, and the end result will be spectacular, as usual, which is what I'd expect from my nemesis.
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Hope the special effects are going well. Like i mentioned in class - i would just understand the context that we are seeing the money being shot in so you can translate that for the viewer. it is holding together visually so you don't need to use the movement/transitions to create unity. Good luck - let me know if you need more feedback about anything. The images/tone/dirt/sound are all working well together.
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